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Friday, August 18, 2017

100 word challenge #44

Week 4:


This is the new 100 word challenge #44



Just what is the story behind this character’s laughter?




The form will close on 19th August at 23.45 BST   

The sea is a swirly storm. My laughter is unexpectedly contagious. My heart is thunder. The moss is like gold.The seal's nose is brown bark ,the pieces of seaweed are carrots. My whiskers are wire, my teeth are rocks. My nails are sharp knifes, my feet are 1 meter rulers. My stomach is an elephant, my fingers are sausages.The rocks are grey tiles, the leaves are carvings. The rocks are a crunchy bar my tongue is a red skin. The spots on my face are strawberries, the seaweed is a snail.My mouth is moving “Chop, chop, chop”.

2 comments:

  1. Hello Talia!
    I really enjoyed your unusual presentation for the laughing seal. You have used some great vocabulary for your reader to really see the picture. I wonder if you could think of smells that would be around?
    I'm going to pop this on the showcase!
    Well done!

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  2. Hi talia I like the way you puted funny stuff I really like that. From shaun💩

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