A long time ago there was a proud and young elf he called himself the rescuer of the town.He was going for an evening run around the block and he came upon a gravestone in the middle of a football field. He ran across the field to the gravestone and realised that it was a human grave. He heard noises from the grave “ B͆O͆O͆M͆,B͆O͆O͆M͆ and decided that he needed to call his sidekick to come quickly so he can come check out what is going on……… the sidekick got there and he asked what was wrong. Elf said “I heard noises down there” Sidekick said “what noises” elf replied “Banging”. Then the ground started to shake around that area they got scared then the ground started to open up where the grave was then ……………….
A skeleton came up out of the ground and said “hello friend” elf and his sidekick were shaken. They ran for there life back to there house and never came out……….
Talia I like how you used sound effects when the elf heard the strange noises from the grave.Did the skeleton stay outside of the grave or did he go back into it.Overall I really like your creative story it is very interesting
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