Crime Scene
Written by Talia Taurua
In Christchurch there has been a crime committed. We have just discovered that on September 8th there has been an 11 year old girl her name was Karina that has just practised gymnastics that was just getting ready to pack up.Her mum has heard her yelling she sprinted to the girl. But it was already too late.Her hands had already touched the bottom of the swamp and her heels were popping out. The mum says that she saw a guy in a black suit running off .She says “I can't believe that I couldn't save her”. R.I.P Karina
WALT write a Newspaper report.
Hi Talia,
ReplyDeletePoor Karina! Good news report. The use of facts and figures made it sound professional. You left me wanting to know more. Who was the mysterious figure in the black suit? Why did they push Karina? I hope the police catch the villain soon! Great work.
Michael (Team 100WC), Warwick, UK
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