Friday, April 7, 2017

The Cloud

The Cloud             
Make a copy, rename and start your writing on your copy.

The cloud came from the sea.....
He was not like other clouds,
The wind could not command him,
The more he saw, the more he did,
And the more he did, the more he became,
You see he wasn't just a cloud...
He was a cloud made of more.

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Before you start writing think about the following questions:
Where this strange cloud came from?  It cannot be commanded by the wind, who is controlling it? Does the cloud have a purpose in life? Does the cloud have a personality?

WALT write a narrative.

Describe the cloud growing up, being just another ordinary cloud in the sky until one day..... Something happened to change all that.

We know we have done this when:
We have written what the cloud is thinking as it discovers what it’s purpose is in life and we have described some of the adventures that have happened.

Go to this padlet The Cloud and start writing your ideas, words feelings adjectives similies and metaphors.

Once this is completed you can publish it on your personal blog.

One day this guy was doing a science experiment and he asked another guy if I could test it out for him and the guy said “yes I would love to help”. Then one day on the 23rd of October 2011 they met again and they tested it out. So the guy got out his acid for the science experiment then told the guy”can you please stand in that wardrobe thing and I will tip the acid on you”.Suddenly he jumped in the wardrobe. The other guy said “let's do it but first will it hurt or burn me” the other guy said”ok I am not going to lie about it but it will hurt but after about 5 seconds it will go away” the other guy said” I think I will be ok”.They counted to 3 1,2,3 BOOM then he realized that it was another acid.I spilt it on him and I forgot to read the bottle and it said THIS BOTTLE IS THE CLOUD POTION oops it was the wrong one he will stay a cloud for ever.

But one day on 2017 the guy who turned the other guy into a cloud was happy for him because he was rolling around the city.He was watching little kids and fighting crime and putting out fires with his rain.He had a happy bit of him inside but a angry bit inside. He was happy for people to have good days and happy for the kids playing on the playground. Before long he was also angry inside at the guy who turned into a cloud and so he still tries to find him till this day. The next day he was rolling around the city watching the kids playing and parents shopping but 1 hour after that he saw a big smoke cloud in the air and it was black.  It was as black as tar just getting put on the the road.He goes over there and he says to himself I need to help these fire fighters. The fire fighter's engines were as loud as a jackhammer going into the ground.I said to myself “i'm going to help them” and so I went over there to them and I started to rain water on the fire and it puts out the fire for them, I was relieved that I helped someone today.

I am actually proud to say that I am a cloud because I know I can do more things being a cloud. I like doing all these missions and all the jobs I actually like being a cloud  and being proud of myself for once.I'm glad I am a cloud.

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