100 word challenge #44

Week 4:

This is the new 100 word challenge #44

Just what is the story behind this character’s laughter?

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The sea is a swirly storm. My laughter is unexpectedly contagious. My heart is thunder. The moss is like gold.The seal's nose is brown bark ,the pieces of seaweed are carrots. My whiskers are wire, my teeth are rocks. My nails are sharp knifes, my feet are 1 meter rulers. My stomach is an elephant, my fingers are sausages.The rocks are grey tiles, the leaves are carvings. The rocks are a crunchy bar my tongue is a red skin. The spots on my face are strawberries, the seaweed is a snail.My mouth is moving “Chop, chop, chop”.

The Magician TT

Week 3 extension activity: The Magician

WALT: To include relative clauses in my writing.

Key task:

Write 5 (or more) sentences containing a “relative clause”?

E.g. The magician, who had incredible powers, strode confidently across the marble floor.

1. It splits the main clause.
2. The clause begins with ‘who’, ‘which’ or ‘with’.
3. It must supply an extra bit of information to the sentence.
4. Commas should surround the clause.

Think about these questions:

• What mood do you think the magician is in?
• Do you think he is a good or evil character?
• If you could have magical powers, what would you choose to be able to do?
• What do the words at the top of the picture say?
• Who lives inside the house?

Success criteria:

I will know I am successful when I have:

• Included a relative clause in my writing
• Used who, which or with in my writing
• Used commas to separate my clause

I am a magician, who had incredible powers, strode confidently across the marble floor.I am feeling like I am indestructible i’m feeling proud as proud as I can be.I think I am magnificent I am as nice as anyone can imagination.I wish I was transparent or camouflage but I dream to be as light as a feather.A boof of smoke came up and it spelt a word Minimint.I wonder why it said that doggy.Well were are my brother and sister they yell out to me

“Scotty come inside now mum wants you?” I said

“I'm coming now” It is time for dinner so I have to stop tell my story or it go on forever and ever so “BYE”

Whale Fantasia/Wiki 3

          Week 3   Whale Fantasia

This afternoon I am going to jump off a boat to go swimming with the humpback whales.I am as excited as if I was going to disneyland for a holiday.I put on my gear and jump “wow”.The water is as clear as glass and the sun is as bright as a flame.I go deeper and deeper down  into the water, it gets blacker and blacker and  it is as black as diesel.I see some very tiny fish they are as tiny as a kernel. Suddenly I pop up into a cave “WOW” It is as sparkly as a sapphire it stuns my eyes.This is paradise.Now we are getting up to the enormouse large humpback whales. Their barnacles on the soft fleshy back are as rough as concrete.Their tails are as extremely big they are as big as a building.Their tummies are as wrinkly as a old grandpas skin.Their mouths are enormously My legs are sore  like I have just ran a 90 mile  marathon. Suddenly it was time to pop up.Nooo I said in my head I want to stay with the gigantic whales.But my dive tank was going to run out so had to come up.2 minutes later……………. I came up.I had so much fun swimming with the whales today.I hope I can do this again again.  

Arctic Circle

Arctic Circle             

Make a copy, rename and start your writing on your copy.

The Arctic Circle animation.  In a desolate landscape one man's survival depends on the single fruit tree by his house.  One day a strange box arrives and gives him a special power.  Will he be able to control his urge to keep the box from his neighbour?

Learn

Click on the url below and watch the short clip

Arctic Circle

Before you start writing think about the following questions:

What is happening? Where is the man? Is he human, how can we tell?  Why is he there on his own?  What option will he choose?

Create  

WALT create an internal monologue for the main character.

We know we have done this when:

We have written what the character is thinking as he discovers what the box of magic is able to do and decides what he will do now?

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Go to this padlet Arctic Circle and start writing your ideas, words feelings adjectives similies and metaphors.

Share

Once this is completed you can publish it on your personal blog.

One day I was standing in the freezing cold spinning and spinning a rusty crank handle.The crank handle brings up water from the well and puts it in the tree so it can grow nice green apples.Finally a nice green apple pops out of the tree  I suddenly pick it and I look around to see if anybody is around.I don't see anyone so I have a nibble and I go to the core of the green apple.Suddenly something goes across my eye and it is a brown box it is  as brown as dried up flax.

I go over to it and I touch it and it is magic a magic ox I thought to myself is there such thing as a magic box I can't believe it there is a magic box in front of me.Then I touch it again and it puts magic in me. I have red hand and move back from and I touch the the nice green apple tree and pop pop pop these green apples pop out of nowhere they are as green as moss on a rock.I pick another apple I squint and and look at the box’s again and I take a step and and the box's moved and moved and moved every step I took the box moved with me.It tried to run away but it couldn't because I ran with it and then it stop and I stopped in front of it. I grabbed it and then something happened I stomped and my foot turned into a box stomp again my other foot turned into a box.my bottom half of my body was a box so I reach my hands out and try to get to Tim's house oh no it’s too late I am a box I move to Tim’s house Tim walks out to wind the waller I wonder if it will start over and over again...