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Titanium
If I had hidden under the table, if I had stayed at home, if I was cooler then I wouldn't have these controlling powers. Scared, bullied, terrified, I was a depressed loner without a friend. I am crouched down in a damaged corridor with papers flying around me . Anxiously walking down the hall wondering what was going to happen, I nervously looked at the terrified teacher in the damaged classroom. I am a mess. Chomping on my dirty nails; heart pounding 100miles per hour; I crunch my fists angrily. I am so alone…...
