tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7130358584482770142.post998899452388392239..comments2023-03-27T21:56:34.111+13:00Comments on Talia: 2024 Blog Adminhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13615564306204625976noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7130358584482770142.post-40914275664979236012016-09-22T09:12:47.021+12:002016-09-22T09:12:47.021+12:00Hi Talia My name Is Jazmine From Mamaku Hub At Gre...Hi Talia My name Is Jazmine From Mamaku Hub At Greymain School.<br />Your Switch story is great and it has full stops and capital letters in it. You have a lot of punctuation in it.<br />It Reminds me the time I had to do a story.<br />Bye Jazmine Is Mamaku Hub Jazminehttp://jazmines102015.blogspot.co.nz/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7130358584482770142.post-13262789731872262312016-08-26T11:46:52.707+12:002016-08-26T11:46:52.707+12:00Kia Ora Llewellyn thank you for posting on my blog...Kia Ora Llewellyn thank you for posting on my blog I will work on spaces in my work.I will visit your blog soon.<br />Taila Taliahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00684349775954769006noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7130358584482770142.post-27510846534194518222016-08-15T09:46:31.039+12:002016-08-15T09:46:31.039+12:00Hi Talia. My name is Llewellyn.
Great Switch Story...Hi Talia. My name is Llewellyn.<br />Great Switch Story and punctuation. You did really well.<br />This reminds me of story writing in Syndicate 1 and 2.<br />You should work on putting spaces after doing full stops.Llewellynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12917276336267957549noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7130358584482770142.post-67217671211707932502016-08-15T09:18:48.483+12:002016-08-15T09:18:48.483+12:00Selamat,Talia I am really like you describing word...Selamat,Talia I am really like you describing words the really hook me in. I also realized that you used a simile. Your writing really hooks me in and I really enjoyed it. Maybe next time you could work on putting a space after a full stop. If you have the time please visit my blog here is the link<br />http://coriannak102015.blogspot.co.nz/ Corianna's Bloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12879272640597822899noreply@blogger.com